I am a Year 6 student at Christ the King School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Miss Graham. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve it.
Hi Patrick, Splendid presentation!! I love the way you described what we did in camp. What was your highlights and lowlights? Well done!! Keep it up!!!
Hi Patty, I like the way you described Piha Mill Camp. What was your best highlight? My one was when we ate ice cream on the beach. Next time I think you should make the font colours better because I can't see some words. Your works if very good and full of facts. Good Work Patty
Hi Patrick I liked how you put so much effort into it.I think you should read through it before you post some sentence's didn't make sence.keep the good work up Patrick.
Hi Patrick. I like the way you used pictures and kept things interesting. Next time you should font colours that the reader can see. I thought that it was interesting that you used different transitions. Keep up the good work!
HI PATRICK i liked the way you added transitions. Next time do a font that the reader can read. it reminds me of the nice view. That was so cool and keep up the good work
Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteSplendid presentation!! I love the way you described what we did in camp. What was your highlights and lowlights? Well done!! Keep it up!!!
From Amy
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ReplyDeleteHi Patty,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described Piha Mill Camp. What was your best highlight? My one was when we ate ice cream on the beach. Next time I think you should make the font colours better because I can't see some words. Your works if very good and full of facts. Good Work Patty
From Remy
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ReplyDeleteHi Patrick
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put so much effort into it.I think you should read through it before you post some sentence's didn't make sence.keep the good work up Patrick.
From Joshua K
Hi Patrick.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used pictures and kept things interesting. Next time you should font colours that the reader can see. I thought that it was interesting that you used different transitions. Keep up the good work!
By:Ferah
HI PATRICK
ReplyDeletei liked the way you added transitions.
Next time do a font that the reader can read.
it reminds me of the nice view.
That was so cool and keep up the good work
BY:MELIANNA