
I am a Year 6 student at Christ the King School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Miss Graham. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve it.
Wednesday, 11 June 2014
laptop lost
There once lived a boy named Joe. He was with his freinds.”We are going to get our food”. Joseph and Steve said. “Ok”. I answered. When we came back. “Where’s my laptop”. I said. “I don’t know”. Jerome replied. I went to MR. Tui’s office and said if he saw my laptop and he said he saw a laptop on the floor and one in the office. I went to the office and I didn’t see it on the steps or ground. I asked the pricipal if she found my laptop but she didn’t see it. “ Have you found your laptop? ”. Jerome said. “No”. I replied in dissapointment. “Joe, Joe!”. Johnsen shouted. “I found your laptop”. “Where?!”. I replied. “The teacher put it in your bag”. He said. I put it in my table and we went to play.

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