I am a Year 6 student at Christ the King School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Miss Graham. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve it.
Tuesday, 27 May 2014
Toyota
“Hurry up Patrick”, my teammates said. I rushed into the car with the others and we took a long trip to the Toyota Festival. There were lots of games, food places and bars. Jaden, Mikal, Enzo and I went to our first game, it was a game where you have to run as fast as you can while the ropes pull you back and you have to put the rugby ball in the hoop. After we went to other games like Volcano Adventure, it is where you go through obstacles and first one back wins. we drank water after each game. The four of us played sports like soccer and basketball. our best game was lazer tag and thats where you have a fake gun and you shoot people. The way to die is if you run out of bullets or if you get hit many times. When I was playing, a guy tricked me into being in my team and shot me many times and I thought that someone else was shooting me and I died after he shot me many times. But I had fun playing anyway.
Finally we all went home and rested after a big time at the Festival.
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Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you started your intro and the way you grabbed my attention. Maybe next tie you should check your work because I found a few mistakes. I wish I HAD a toyota now. Good work Patrick and Keep it up.
By'Ferah